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| Tsukare | Jan 16 2010, 10:52 PM Post #1 |
jelloy goodness. =3
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Your Contact Details: draconous1846@yahoo.com Requirements for the race: -Ask for permission. (Obviously) -Put Inaurian under race type. -In parenthesis, after Inaurian put the element type if you want to be part of a bloodline. -It should look like this [Inaurian (Fire)] or [Akorian (Fire)] Name of Race: Inaurian/Akorian Dwellings: Inaurians are generally found in wooded areas, like forests. They live in villages and make ship towns, that are of various designs. The common village is crafted into the trees surrounding them. Population Size: At the moment there is a population of around 100,000 Inaurians, and around 5,000 Akorians. Government: Feudal Heirarchy: King + Queen: The king and queen control all aspects of the culture. From diplomacy to literature. Every detail of cultural life is controlled by the King, Queen and there subordinates. Royal Servants: The royal families servants serve as both maids, butlers, and the sort, as well as personal advisers. They have alot of power within the civilization. Elite Warriors: The elite warrior class consists of members of the 6 great families, and the best warriors of the race. The Inaurians refer to the Elite Warrior class as the Hatsujin, or death bringers. They are the most lethal, and thereby most respected members of the civilization. The King controls all aspects of the Hatsujin. Warrior Class: Under the elite warrior class is the normal warrior class. These warriors usually act as hunters, and an army consisting of more than 80% of the civilization. Merchant Class: They consist of blacksmiths, chefs, craftsmen, furniture makers, produce sellers, marketmen, and the sort. Most of the merchant class consists of outsiders. However they are more than welcome, so long as they abide by the laws of the kingdom. Peasant Class: They work to provide neccissary services, such as educating the children, cropping food, and cooking meals. They may be at the bottom of the 'food chain' but there job is highly respected by all other classes. Outsiders: Outsiders keep there rank in their society within the kingdom. However, there is no such thing as diplomatic immunity. All people must obey the laws of the kingdom. Technological Stage: Spoiler: click to toggle Appearance: The Inaurians are a feline race of humanoids, covered in a grey/blue fur. There hands are gecko-like which allows them to stick to surfaces. There feet are bird like with three digits in the front, and two in the back making a type of tripod like position so that only the tip of the digits touch the ground at any given point in time. They are able to make there feet look simian, as the back digits act as thumbs and can move beside the front digits. The feet have the same gecko-like quality that their hands have. The only difference between an Inaurian and an Akorian is a deviled tail which holds the Akorian‘s innate chaotic powers. They also age much slower than humans. The equivalent adult age of an Inaurian is around 42. eye colour: There sclera (the outer white portion of the human eye) is black, and the pupil and iris is white and cloud-like. Akorians have three cloud-like spheres in a triangular pattern in the middle of there eyes, which move in tandem with there emotions, and concentrate into a single rotating sphere when using soul gaze. hair colour: Any shade of grey or blue. There hair is usually darker when they are young, and becomes a similar shade of white, or pale blue as they age. skin colour: The only skin that shows is on there hands, feet, and openings. They have a similar shade of skin pending on there hair colour. average height: The average adult height is around 6’2” to 6’4“. average weight: The average adult weight is around 165 lbs to around 185 lbs. average build: They are generally very built and muscular. Race powers (minor): Sticky Hands and Feet: They can stick to surfaces like a gecko. Cat eyes: There eyes are developed to see clearly in the daytime, and at night. They can also see etheric entities, and auras. Soul Gaze: Inaurians who do not have a family ability, have the ability to confuse, calm, distract, or paralyze those who they have direct eye contact with, kind of like hypnotism. Race powers (major): Each 'family' or clan has a meta-power which allows control over one element. There are 6 clans which cover water, fire, earth, air, light, and shadow. Each clan also has special techniques that are taught to various skill levels. [Pick One] Ikiro Family: Auric Fog: The user can emit a thick fog which only he/she can see through, and that only he/she can control on will. With practice he may compact the fog enough to stop movement, or create look alike doubles of himself within the fog. With more practice he may transform into fog, and move through his own fog. Masters of this can condense fog to make water, they can than control the water as they see fit. Special Techniques: -Tangling mist: The user compacts the fog around a target, until the target is unable to move. Uratoha Family Create/Control Fire: The user of this ability can create fire on will, and control any ambient force of fire. He can also control the heat within other objects which he has contact with. Gaining the ability with practice to create ash of various densities and forms. Masters of this ability can vibrate the molecules of an object so quickly that the object turns into a bomb. (Kind of like Gambits ability.) Special Techniques: -Dance of the fire fly: This combines the users ability to create and control fire into a deadly dance which throws out flames with each movement. Transforming the user into a whirling vision of hell. Irebusijo Family Earth Meld/Assimilation: The user of this ability can meld into various forms of earth, and can assimilate the characteristics of anything he can meld into. He begins only capable of melding into sand, and soil. But with practice he can meld into stone, earth, and wood. Later he can even meld into metal and minerals. Urodoarosu Family Control Air: The user of this ability can control air currents however he sees fit. He can create blades of air which can cut through steel, and even fly using currents to keep him aloft. With practice there control of air becomes so intense that they can begin to control static electicity, and masters of this ability can move in the form of a lightning bolt for a few moments at a time. Ochifushiro Family: Phazing: This allows for the user to teleport anywhere that he can see, or anywhere he knows. Many family members use an item, which they familiarize themselves with, so that they may teleport to that item no matter where it is. Urodoarosu Family: Shadow Manipulation: Beginners of this technique move there own shadows about, and feel through there shadow. There shadow becomes apart of there body. With practice they can use there shadow as an extra arm, becoming able to attack with there shadow, they may also bring there shadow into themselves becoming like a shadow. With more practice, masters of this ability can even meld into shadows, and use ambient shadow as they do they’re own. Akorian Chaotic Spirit: Rather than having a family ability as some Inaurians do, Akorian’s have a natural ability to control there own chaotic spirit. Beginners of this ability can vibrate there bodies so fast that they can emit a natural noise which causes migraines to those around them and can shatter glass. With practice they may use they’re chaotic nature to create a sort of force which they can manipulate. Kind of like a Jedi master but they use it more like a sith. Masters of this ability can control the chaotic nature of other objects and certain entities, in some cases to destroy such objects. This technique doesn’t work on most weapons (as metals are a pure substance) but will work on most natural inanimate objects like trees, and grass and such. Race Religion/Docterim: The Inaurian religion is polytheistic, and hierarchal. Spoiler: click to toggle Race History: [Agamnatii 1:1:1-8 translated into english] In the beginning there was chaos. Out of Chaos came Light. Out of Light came Dosu. Out of Dosu came the Sky. Out of the Sky came the water. With the water came the earth. Out of the Earth came the trees. Out of the trees came life, but life was lonely and wanted a companion. So Dosu created companions. Things that lived with the sky. Things that lived with the water. Things that lived with the earth and trees. All of these things became lonesome. So Dosu created those who walk without fur. For a long time they were good friends, but those who walk without fur, wanted to spread out among the world, and so they left. Around this time Dosu met a fellow Goddess who also had been born from chaos, named Ashtr. They slept together and Ashtr beget a young boy and girl. They were the first Akorians. Those who are born from chaos. Dosu saw the hatred and destructive cravings of the two, and after binding the chaotic nature of there spirit into the tails, he promptly severed it. The two became docile, and peaceful. They were the ones who live in peace. The first Inaurians. This is how the Inaurians apparently came to be, but no one knows the true origins of these unique humanoids. All that is known is that they are immensely advanced physically and mentally. They are built to survive, and for the past 100,000+ years that’s exactly what they have done. Through wars, plagues, and various catastrophes they have survived. Only to become stronger, and wiser under there eternal leaders. They have only just been discovered by humans however, and now they see fit to interact with there “cousins.” The Inaurian civilization is unique in a number of ways. First and for most they are supposedly the first civilization to create weapons such as swords and bows. As such they have had millennia of practice honing there skills. There blades surpass all in existence, and there bows are even stronger than the most powerful compound bows today. There hierarchy is similar to feudal hierarchy. The King and Queen oversee all aspects of the cultural life. After them are the King and Queens servants, who don’t serve as slaves or maids or what not, but as person assistants and managers of various areas. Kind of like the secretary of state, and what not in the American government. After them comes the elite warrior class. Than the warrior class. Than the merchant class, and finally the peasants. Outsiders keep there rank from there culture. The president of the USA is the president of the USA no matter where he goes. The Inaurian civilization has had a number of internal struggles as well. The most prominent is the Akorian uprising. Where a number of Akorian rebels attempted to assassinate the royal family. As a result, the Akorians are currently being hunted by the elite warrior class. However, for the sake of there relations with there human cousins, they have agreed to a non-aggression pact in human populated areas. The Inaurian culture is rich and diverse. Among having there own religion, they also have there own dialect. This dialect has the same vocal combinations as Japanese. Many of there words are actually reverse japanese. Take the word shadow for example. In Japanese the word for shadow is Kage. In Inaurian the same word is Egako. Shadows is Egaku. Many words end in A, I, O, and U. Feminine words end in 'A' for singular words, and 'I' for Plural. Masculine words end in 'O' for singular, and 'U' for plural. The Inaurians have developed there own writing system, but for the sake of better comunication they have recently adopted the Japanese Katakana, Hiragana, and Kanji system. As well as the English alphabet. They're traditional writing system is based on a combinations of straight and curved lights, cirles, dots, and others. They have over 7,500 combinations, which they combine to form words, sentences, and the sort. Common words: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Tsukare, Jan 20 2010, 01:36 PM.
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| Carniku | Jan 17 2010, 08:03 AM Post #2 |
Mega-Flare!
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Ok...Races go in the approval forums along with applications for new powers, organisations and what-not, so your currently 88 off applying for them. So, now you know where it goes. You might also want to read through what races are already there if you get time as I think we have a few that follows similar lines to these. >_> Sorry, that may have been a bit of a buzzkill. |
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| Tsukare | Jan 17 2010, 10:06 AM Post #3 |
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jelloy goodness. =3
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That's no buzzkill. I checked the races before I posted this here as a work in progress. The closest race in appearance so far is the Nekojin, and there not even similar to the Inaurian/Akorians. I'm keeping this here because my computer sucks, and I don't want to loose any data. This way I have it in a familiar place, and I can still edit it. When I get my 88 more posts, than I can just copy and paste this over to the application section. I hope that's Ok.  |
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| Carniku | Jan 17 2010, 11:30 AM Post #4 |
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Mega-Flare!
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Welll.... I'll move it to Creativity Corner in Free Talk, since CtS is kinda just for things we need to fix ideally. But at a first glance, apart from Nekojins, You've also got Moonians who are pretty similar so that might be worth checking. Anyhow, if you have any more questions or anything then PM me or one of the staff to talk about it (or go in Chat, we're normally floating around in there) but this isn't really a CtS issue I think. |
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| Tsukare | Jan 17 2010, 12:42 PM Post #5 |
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jelloy goodness. =3
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Thank you for moving this. When I checked the Moonians out originally there wasn't any major similarities. If there were similarities they were very minor. I'll look them over again, and if there are any major similarities that I overlooked, I'll edit my race so that those similarities are either nonexistant, or minor at the most. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Edit: I looked over the Moonians again, and the only similarities is there government being feudal, and there race being a warrior-type, and them having important families. However those are all minor similarities, and the similarities are different between the two. I appreciate any input anyone has on this WIP. Edited by Tsukare, Jan 17 2010, 07:11 PM.
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| Ryu | Jan 17 2010, 08:08 PM Post #6 |
YEAH-UH!
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Moonians are also a race a felines. |
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| Tsukare | Jan 17 2010, 11:12 PM Post #7 |
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jelloy goodness. =3
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True the moonians are feline, but so are nekojin. I think that's a minor similarity with these. Over all, with that similarity included, there really isn't any major similarities between this and any of the other races. These are actually more of a chimera, than a cat. They have Gecko-Like hand and feet pads, bird-like feet structure, and a devil-like tail. However it is true that they look mostly like a cat. If I were to say chimera-like, I believe many would jump to an image of a lion with eagle wings, and a dragon for a tail. Which isn't what these are at all. I thank you for your comment however. If there are many others who feel that these resemble Moonians and Nekojin too closely in appearance I will clearify there appearance. |
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