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| Faydra Rockwood | Feb 2 2010, 09:12 PM Post #1 |
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[[To use this template correctly, fill out the fields to the right of the coding tags. Bear in mind, you are not limited to this coding. Creativity and originality is encouraged.]] Name: Faydra Rockwood Codename: [St. Lily Characters Only] Keyword R1711 Age: 17 DOB: August 13, 1993 Gender: Female School: AHS Grade: 11 Race: Meta-Human Appearance/Clothing: Her hair is brown, and it falls to her shoulders. It's a cute cut, really, framing her face with fringed bangs kissing her right eyebrow. Her eyes are an alluring emerald; easy to catch attention with. She has a set of full lips that match her slender, yet angled, face. She stands at about 5'7", and weighs only 100lbs. For a tiny girl, she's tough. She has long legs, and her form is actually curvy, despite her smaller size. She's typically seen in a shirt and a pair of jeans or shorts. She normally wears casual shoes; something like Converse, Vans, or a simple pair of slip-on shoes.  ***NOTE: The original lineart belonged to a friend. I colored this image. I can give you full proof if you DO NOT believe me.**** Here's Riley Kross:  He's (c) to my friend, sharinganalchemist.deviantart.com Personality: She's your confident girl, but only when she needs to be. She's mysterious and shy most of the time, unless she's approaching someone first. Faydra is mostly optimistic and is barely ever dragged down into a dull mood. She stands up for her friends, and makes sure they're treated the best way that they can be; even better than she treats herself. She loves all kinds of sweets, and she even loves sour things. She also loves all old English behavior, and tries to carry the accent; she does it, very well, considering her family's background being of an Asian/British nature. She also loves to meet new people, and never really backs down from an opportunity that will and should have a positive outcome. Special Powers/Weapons: She can calm those around of her or upset them, but only for a few moments. It also only applies if the person or persons are three to four feet to her range. She also has a deck of cards that isn't all too plain. The deck is simple, though; it has sharper edges so that they can be used as a weapon. History Before Arrival: She was your simple popular girl at a smaller, yet casual, private school. Her uncle was the Principal and that's where she met Riley Kross. She sat with him in the same Biology and Japanese History class. He was so adorably hot.. cute.. handsome.. She admired everything about him. He was so hard to keep her eyes away from. She's always been like that, though. She was pulled out of the private school after her freshman and sophomore years. Thus she ended up at the more public(in the sense of popularity), yet was a private school, AHS. Of course her parents paid the tuition for her to attend; They wanted her to be able to mingle with people that were more like their prized daughter. She had always lived in Japan, but never attended such a popular private school. Her past life was stuck at a smaller school in Osaka, but it was cozy and nice. She had her Aunt, Ms. Harudagawa, as a teacher in her Junior High years. Upon moving to the bigger, more accepting school, she was able to express herself without feeling as an outcast. She had a lovely set of powers, but it was only one small thing she could do. She could manipulate the moods of those in a range of three to four feet around of her. She could make them mad, sad, or happy. She found this out once when she was really little. Her best friend, Alyssa Kraft, whom of which was an Army brat that lived in Osaka next door to Faydra for a while. It wasn't until the day Alyssa fell and cut up her knees and was crying that Faydra knew she could change peoples moods. She had hugged Alyssa and told her to calm down and be happy. As soon as she had, Alyssa cheered up for long enough that she could get her knee fixed up... Ever since then, Faydra has only used her smaller power to help people, not hurt them. There was one time, though, when she was in her Junior year.. There was a bully that kept picking on Alyssa for being an army brat. Faydra remembered the guy... he was tall, and mean and he was slightly chubby. Faydra had made the guy, Yakuza, be really nice to Alyssa for a few brief moments. As soon as Yakuza had snapped out of it, he ran off crying because Alyssa had rejected his kindness. Once Faydra was finished with her Junior years, she was torn away from Alyssa. It was a very sad day for her. She cried, a lot, and couldn't help but do so every so often.. But, she got to visit Alyssa in America from time to time. Another thing that kept her mind off of Alyssa's absence was a boy. His name was Riley Kross. She met him her freshmen year at another school in Osaka. It was a public school. She had never been to a public school, and by the looks of Riley, he had been in one his whole life. He was amazingly handsome. He had caught Faydra's heart so fast, she couldn't contain herself. After a while of carefully learning a few things about Riley, the day came that they sat together in a Biology class. He started talking to her first. It made her knees weak, and her heart attempted to jump out of her chest... The days followed, and Riley confessed his feelings. Faydra and Riley dated one another for a year and three months before he was shipped off to college. He was a senior while she was a sophomore.. It tore her heart up, but Riley promised to write her and stay in contact with her. She only hoped that one day they could be back together. Until she came here to AHS. It was a whole new school, and a whole new experience. Only two years left for her, but she could manage without Riley... She hoped. History After Arrival: To be added after there's been some stuff to add onto it~. Relationships Family: Vincent and Yuminari Rockwood Mortal Enemy: None as of yet. Rival(s): None as of yet. Acquaintances: None as of yet. Friends: None as of yet. Good Friends: Riley Cross, Alyssa Kraft. Best Friend: Riley Cross. Dating: Was dating Riley Kross. Loves: Her family and friends. ---------- STUDENT I.D: THIS CAN BE REMOVED AFTER YOU HAVE HAD THE CHARACTER ACCEPTED(We keep record of it) [b]Character Name[/b]: Faydra Rockwood [b]Race[/b]: Meta-Human [b]Gender[/b]: Female. [b]Powers[/b]: Can calm the mood atmosphere or upset it, but only if they're 3-4 feet close to her. This also only works for a few moments. Usually a whole minute, tops. She can also has a deck of cards that have naturally sharp edges that she uses as a weapon. ( She rarely ever fights, though. ) Edited by Faydra Rockwood, Feb 9 2010, 06:51 PM.
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| Dark Prince | Feb 2 2010, 09:23 PM Post #2 |
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Hello DarkPrince here, i'll be reviewing your profile, I don't know if you finished or if you accidentally posted your work in progress in the wrong area. Keyword: Good Appearance: I need appearance, right now i got floating female clothing, if you need help i can give you some questions to guide you, of you can poke in the link in my signature the one that says mah chest box and there a list of characters Joanne and Trish are girls. Personality: Good Start, but we need a bit more, hobbies, how she treats her friends, what she dislike or likes, stuff like that if you need help you can do the same as before. The last thing i'm going to mention if you have powers then your meta human. If you have any questions you can shoot me a PM , Poke me in the chats or in the chat box all the way down there in the main page, don't be afraid I don't bite =) |
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| Faydra Rockwood | Feb 3 2010, 06:13 AM Post #3 |
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How about now~? |
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| Dark Prince | Feb 3 2010, 07:04 AM Post #4 |
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Appearance: A lot better. Personality: A lot better O= Now to powers:
Im a bit iffy about this one because your technically controlling there emotions to certain extent, but lets see if we can polish it, Range? 5 meters[15feet]? can she pick who she affects? is it at random? or everyone in her range? How long can she keep it up? any other details you think that may be important you can add.
Controlling cards sure, giving the cards a cutting edge ok, transforming them to completely other objects falls as a third power, but if you want to give them an edge or something and control there flight that may be acceptable, to a certain extent. |
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| Faydra Rockwood | Feb 3 2010, 04:27 PM Post #5 |
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All right! It's only when they're three to four feet in range to her. It works even better if they're closer. As for the cards: They're a special deck as it is. Instead of the simple 52 cards with Hearts, Diamonds, Clubs, and Spades, there's colored roses. Four different colors; representing the symbols. She can manipulate the deck of cards at her will to transform into the flowers, or change into a regular 52 card deck. She can also give them a sharper edge and use them as throwing 'knives,' though they're still just regular cards. (: She can also copy a card so that there's more than one. A clone, if you will. Edited by Faydra Rockwood, Feb 3 2010, 04:35 PM.
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| Dark Prince | Feb 3 2010, 04:41 PM Post #6 |
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Well could you add the range please =D So it's like a magic deck O_o The tricks are simple but there many, but lets see what we can do, if i understood they can: 1. Turn into roses 2. Get a sharper Edge 3. Copy themselves right? nothing else. |
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| Faydra Rockwood | Feb 3 2010, 06:37 PM Post #7 |
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Correct. And that's it. Her powers are simple~.. o.o; Very simple. |
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| Dark Prince | Feb 3 2010, 07:03 PM Post #8 |
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Ok, i think i have a good grasp over your powers now. First divide them into two instead of one paragraph, If you can add more information about your fist power like if you can control who it gets affected and stuff like that it would be great. Now your cards, technically you have three powers and i can't accept that no Mather how small or weak, but some quick thinking may work, we drop the copy power out of the cards and just add that you have extra copies of the same card, and we make the naturally sharp, and you can find cards whit metal edges in some specialty shops so still good up to that point and we leave the transform into rose as its only power and we one one strong card whit technically one power. That works for you? |
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| Faydra Rockwood | Feb 3 2010, 07:20 PM Post #9 |
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But I like the cards better... I'd rather drop the mood power. D: I looove my cards~. |
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| Faydra Rockwood | Feb 3 2010, 07:22 PM Post #10 |
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Or.. well.. maybe not.. I dunno. D: Maybe just drop the object manipulation and keep it as a deck with sharp edges that she's trained herself not to get cut on. (: |
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| Dark Prince | Feb 3 2010, 07:30 PM Post #11 |
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Well when you decide, remember to Edit the the ID and please split it in two for ease of reading. *nods* Also then we start working whit the history, since we need a little more and need to fix a few details like AHS is not public, its private and there's a 20,000 dollar tuition =3 |
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| Faydra Rockwood | Feb 3 2010, 07:42 PM Post #12 |
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The ID? o.o; What'm I supposed to make the ID? Also.. Okay. (: I'll fix it up~. |
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| Faydra Rockwood | Feb 3 2010, 07:56 PM Post #13 |
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Got it! (: Haha. |
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| Dark Prince | Feb 3 2010, 08:17 PM Post #14 |
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One final thing and where on the road to stamp and fun =D Can you talk more about her in history, when she found out about her powers, a bit more about here parents, AHS is in Japan so if she's from some where else how she felt about having to take that long trip, among other things, if you need questions and stuff to guide you don't be afraid to poke. |
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| Faydra Rockwood | Feb 3 2010, 08:52 PM Post #15 |
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Done~. |
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| Dark Prince | Feb 3 2010, 09:23 PM Post #16 |
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Sorry that i keep pulling things out, i really want to finish so you can start having fun, but thing keep popping. One you have a few oxymoron's first you mention that she studied US History, unless she's an Army daughter, its hard since she was raised in Japan based on what you wrote, Second you call AHS a public but private, its one or the other but not both and in this case is private. What really glared to me was that you made someone fall in love, and its in the rules, Love powers are no and your powers say nothing about love, calm someone down or upset them, cold water and hot water not Orange soda. |
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| Faydra Rockwood | Feb 9 2010, 06:55 PM Post #17 |
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How about now? :3 |
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| Dark Prince | Feb 10 2010, 10:05 PM Post #18 |
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Well this is your first character, you got the basics down, and its not like your going to blow up the school so, Meh *Twirls stamp* Have fun *Stamps Forehead* |
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| Dark Prince | Feb 14 2010, 07:29 PM Post #19 |
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Accepted! Welcome to Anime High School! As a new student you are able to access all RP forums and are allowed to post new topics, or reply to topics already in progress(Make sure they arn't closed!). You can also change your personal profile, signature, and avatar. You are allowed to make minor edits to your character profile, but any changes to your powers must be approved by staff. You can also apply for another character at anytime. At 100 posts you become a full member and are able to apply for new powers, races, NPCs, and anything else you couldn't before. Thank you for choosing Anime High School! Have fun! ~AHS Staff |
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